if you are visiting my blog for the first time ,please read aquafina guy first,bong chic second,and then this part to enjoy"
"come my lady come come my lady,you're my butterfly sugah baby" her phone rang and she looked whos calling at 9 in the morning..the name flashed "aquafina guy" she looked at the mobile for half a second if it was true..aquafina guy was calling on her number..she had got his cell number from the intranet but how did he..hers was not listed yet..and suddenly it stopped ringing..missed call?
she went to her call register and checked if it was,what it was..and yes it was his number in her log of calls..aquafina guy.9820391787!!!!
how??and why only a missed call??
she pinched herself,to see if it was real..how the fuck did he get her number??which means he was equally interested now:) :)
she waited for the phone to ring again..it did ,but it was her mom checking if she had got back home and if she was sleeping..her first job being a mortgage officer in the US market,meant night shifts,which she hated,till the day she saw him..and since then office was the best part and the canteen was even more important.
as she thought of all this she dozed off with the TV on and when she woke it was 3 in the noon.she checked her phone for the nth time to check if kabir had called..he hadnt..somehow,refering to him as kabir sounded funny..he was laways refered to as the aquafina guy ,but now since he had made a move,he should be known by his name.Somehow she found all these north indian names very cliched,rahul,kabir,sanjay neha,puja should be banned, and parents should be sued for lack of creativity if they name their children by the above.
It was 6 in the evening and by now she was getting impatient,should she call,maybe he would think she is rude by not calling back,no but she should not,he had just given a missed call,it would look too desperate,ohh damn what if he was married so could not call back cuz his wife was around(anushua had considered this option too,because of which she had not made any move)
Damn it..all the nice men on this earth are taken,married or gay.
She finished her weekly grocery,making sure every 5 minutes her battery was on and had complete network..but no..no call or msg
as she put the eggs in the fridge,she stopped,took her phone and stood near the window.
she looked into the phone.."dialing aquafina guy"
it rang around 5 times before it was answered, "hello" and her heart skipped a beat.that precise moment she regreted making the call,for fear of loosing her speech.
he:helloooo
she: hi..uummm i got a missed call in the morning from this number
he:heyii hi..anushua,its me kabir
she:kabir..??(damn i am sure he could hear her ckeeks stretch even as she pretended to play innocent)
he: kabir from office.
she:ohh kabeerrr..the aquafina guy
he:"aquafina guy" nice point of reference
she:yeah..actually i was not so sure of your name..there are two kabir's listed in the intranet,one was kapoor and one was agnihotri, so i wasnt sure which one was you.
he:oh so you had my name,you looked it up in the intranet?
she :(fucckkk) ummm yeah
he:i see..ummm can we talk or you busy
she:(tricky question,needs to be handled with finesse) ohh nahe nahee i just finished cookung ,i can talk
he:you stay alone?
she:yeah..i stay in Vashi ,my parents stay in jamshedpur..where do you stay?
and they spoke for a long time on the phone..long long time,while she ate her maggi,he drove to the ATM withdrew cash packed dinner,she did her dishes while he was on the handsfree,he drove back home and she spoke to him as he opened the lock to his house.She made her bed got inside the blanket,put the phone on charge ,while he kept telling her how sad the noodles was he was eating..and suddenly
he: hey its 3 in the morning..you must be sleepy?i am sorry i kept you up so late
she:its okie,i am glad we finally spoke,beyond the looks we have exchanged, m not sleepy either.
he:i think i will go for a drive to pick up a smoke..i am out of them
she:oh..ok sure
and they spoke as he drove along the empty mumbai streets at 3 in the morning,and she kept telling him how she missed pune..and this weekend she was sulking in mumbai cuz her roomies in pune had exams,so no partying.he was surprised to know she partied,dint look the types,while she exclaimed at knowing he likes listening to rock..he dint seem likes the types to head bang :)
he:heyii which floor do you stay on?
she:second..why?
he:nothing ya..how many roomies do you have?
she:i stay alone..i am pretty tough to put up with..explains why i am the only child..
he: oh..k
suddenly she heard the bell ring..
she:aree itni rata kaun aya?
he:were you expecting someone..be careful when you open the door.
she:ye ya
and she stopped talking as she opened the door,kabir stood outside in his black addidas tracks,a grey t-shirt and the cutest grin on the face,with his tiny canine showing on the left side.
45 comments:
oho!!Liked it to the core....
aww omg I loved it :-)
loved it :)
Bumped into your page. Love it!
Wo ooo ooho.. xD
m hooked up with this tale,continue it soon xD
Oh Hi Nil.
Ah, Sulagna, you're getting better and better. This story is getting cheesier and cheesier!
We want more!
Black tracks and grey Tee? That's it? :P
ohhhh la la.... i was imagining tht i am the girl ;) hehehe
Wow another DDLJ in the making... continue...... plzzzzzz
"Somehow she found all these north indian names very cliched,rahul,kabir,sanjay neha,puja should be banned"
heheheh
M a north Indian too but I have got a bit unique name!
Wow ghar aa gaya raat k 3 baje.
mmmmmmm
Very very nice :)
You made me smile today.
hey nice blog..!!
Hey there,glad you came on my page :) Hope to see you there more often,i totally do!
There,I'm a stalker of your blog now ;) Update!! :)
Awesome!! :)
@ Desigheeandcoffee: Damn missed your comment.. Hi! :)
hmmm... thats another nice one!!
hmmm... thats another nice one!!
Sulagna,
Just beautiful. Loved it. What next? And is the number real? LOL.
Take care
Loved it.. I can't figure out who the characters are yet... is it you or a friend???
oh fuuuuuuuuuuck
sula, this is turning out to be one of my fav stories :D
name changed? anushua is nice
and KABIR is such a GOOD NAME, i so love the sound of it, might just name my kid KABIR..damn cute. i love it
grey t and black tracks --> Hotness.
what's anushua wearing??
next one better be for 18+ :p
why didnt i see your blog earlier?!
i love your space!
:)
finally.
ps: part 4 will take an eterenity coming. if u wanna read something else try my other blog.
:(
when you comment like that how am i supposed to say no? sigh.
i can try to come up with something, though i rather it come up by itself.
khaak ke high standards...i am just avoiding narcissistic buggers. had my share last month. dont mind huh?
you absolutely want to believe i am an over confident bastard dont u? :D
of course u will, that makes you smart. :P
yes you can get a fatak se reply this way too. :)
but if u prefer i dont keep them moderated, let me know. its fine. i can remove it.
Why no new post???
We're waiting...
What next? Wish such stuff happens with me too
And i would have disclosed my name but for some scandalous stuff...read August posts in my blog
i'm actually kinda freaked out .... is kabir a psycho killer ? (twist to the story :P)
hey. :)
happy new year to you too. enjoy the party.
you are tagged! :)
You've been awarded :)
oji its just getting better and bettr. read it loved it :)
wish you an awesome new year ahead, may god's blessings be always on you.....
take care and keep writing.............
you have been awarded too :)
i was seeing chak de then SRK was called Kabir and immediately reminded of yur story!!...keep em coming
Happy New Year!!!
have a fantastic New year
I loved this romantic saga to the core..keep them coming..
Hope this is not the end..
Desperately waiting for the Fourth Part..
Happy New Year!!
:-)
Hey hon, happy new year!
awsum :) .. continue ..
babe,you've been tagged on my 2010 post...Go read! (:
http://www.telegraphindia.com/1100103/jsp/calcutta/story_11937260.jsp
Sulagna do see this. !!
Hey You have been Tagged..... :)
very tastefully done.
Interesting read, since the characters are so easy to click with! :)
Well, you have been awarded the 'Best follower Award', check my blog. Congratulations!!
hey...i read the series u posted... its simply...awesome!!!
greaaat..captivating,magical and romantic...ful packed stuff...u seem like chetan bhagat yaar!! keep rocking!!!
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