Sunday, December 27, 2009

How Aquafina Guy spoke to the Bong Chic

if you are visiting my blog for the first time ,please read aquafina guy first,bong chic second,and then this part to enjoy"

Anushua was sitting in front of the tv at home,watching something about Paris Hiltons latest video on CNN..she wondered how could such stuff be even publicised when its so clearly a manipulated video of some look alike porn star(no she dint mean that paris is a porn star)

"come my lady come come my lady,you're my butterfly sugah baby" her phone rang and she looked whos calling at 9 in the morning..the name flashed "aquafina guy" she looked at the mobile for half a second if it was true..aquafina guy was calling on her number..she had got his cell number from the intranet but how did he..hers was not listed yet..and suddenly it stopped ringing..missed call?

she went to her call register and checked if it was,what it was..and yes it was his number in her log of calls..aquafina guy.9820391787!!!!

how??and why only a missed call??
she pinched herself,to see if it was the fuck did he get her number??which means he was equally interested now:) :)

she waited for the phone to ring did ,but it was her mom checking if she had got back home and if she was sleeping..her first job being a mortgage officer in the US market,meant night shifts,which she hated,till the day she saw him..and since then office was the best part and the canteen was even more important.

as she thought of all this she dozed off with the TV on and when she woke it was 3 in the noon.she checked her phone for the nth time to check if kabir had called..he hadnt..somehow,refering to him as kabir sounded funny..he was laways refered to as the aquafina guy ,but now since he had made a move,he should be known by his name.Somehow she found all these north indian names very cliched,rahul,kabir,sanjay neha,puja should be banned, and parents should be sued for lack of creativity if they name their children by the above.

It was 6 in the evening and by now she was getting impatient,should she call,maybe he would think she is rude by not calling back,no but she should not,he had just given a missed call,it would look too desperate,ohh damn what if he was married so could not call back cuz his wife was around(anushua had considered this option too,because of which she had not made any move)

Damn it..all the nice men on this earth are taken,married or gay.

She finished her weekly grocery,making sure every 5 minutes her battery was on and had complete network..but call or msg

as she put the eggs in the fridge,she stopped,took her phone and stood near the window.

she looked into the phone.."dialing aquafina guy"
it rang around 5 times before it was answered, "hello" and her heart skipped a beat.that precise moment she regreted making the call,for fear of loosing her speech.


she: hi..uummm i got a missed call in the morning from this number

he:heyii hi..anushua,its me kabir

she:kabir..??(damn i am sure he could hear her ckeeks stretch even as she pretended to play innocent)

he: kabir from office.

she:ohh kabeerrr..the aquafina guy

he:"aquafina guy" nice point of reference

she:yeah..actually i was not so sure of your name..there are two kabir's listed in the intranet,one was kapoor and one was agnihotri, so i wasnt sure which one was you.

he:oh so you had my name,you looked it up in the intranet?

she :(fucckkk) ummm yeah

he:i see..ummm can we talk or you busy

she:(tricky question,needs to be handled with finesse) ohh nahe nahee i just finished cookung ,i can talk

he:you stay alone?

she:yeah..i stay in Vashi ,my parents stay in jamshedpur..where do you stay?

and they spoke for a long time on the phone..long long time,while she ate her maggi,he drove to the ATM withdrew cash packed dinner,she did her dishes while he was on the handsfree,he drove back home and she spoke to him as he opened the lock to his house.She made her bed got inside the blanket,put the phone on charge ,while he kept telling her how sad the noodles was he was eating..and suddenly

he: hey its 3 in the must be sleepy?i am sorry i kept you up so late

she:its okie,i am glad we finally spoke,beyond the looks we have exchanged, m not sleepy either.

he:i think i will go for a drive to pick up a smoke..i am out of them

she:oh..ok sure

and they spoke as he drove along the empty mumbai streets at 3 in the morning,and she kept telling him how she missed pune..and this weekend she was sulking in mumbai cuz her roomies in pune had exams,so no partying.he was surprised to know she partied,dint look the types,while she exclaimed at knowing he likes listening to rock..he dint seem likes the types to head bang :)

he:heyii which floor do you stay on?


he:nothing many roomies do you have?

she:i stay alone..i am pretty tough to put up with..explains why i am the only child..

he: oh..k

suddenly she heard the bell ring..

she:aree itni rata kaun aya?

he:were you expecting careful when you open the door.

she:ye ya

and she stopped talking as she opened the door,kabir stood outside in his black addidas tracks,a grey t-shirt and the cutest grin on the face,with his tiny canine showing on the left side.


aritra the daydreamer said...

oho!!Liked it to the core....

Huda Merchant said...

aww omg I loved it :-)

Chocolate Lover said...

loved it :)

nil said...

Bumped into your page. Love it!

Sunakshi said...

Wo ooo ooho.. xD

m hooked up with this tale,continue it soon xD

Anonymous said...

Oh Hi Nil.

Ah, Sulagna, you're getting better and better. This story is getting cheesier and cheesier!

We want more!

Anonymous said...

Black tracks and grey Tee? That's it? :P

DiDo said...

ohhhh la la.... i was imagining tht i am the girl ;) hehehe

Wow another DDLJ in the making... continue...... plzzzzzz

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

woww! im dying with the sweetness of it! haha!! especially their phone call!!! so so cheesyy!!! is it really the ending.??? oh...>.< i want more about them!! haha..! what happened next..? :3

Manjari Singh said...

"Somehow she found all these north indian names very cliched,rahul,kabir,sanjay neha,puja should be banned"
M a north Indian too but I have got a bit unique name!

Wow ghar aa gaya raat k 3 baje.


♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

yay! that's good to hear!

anyway, have I ever told you I gave you an award.? :3

its on my second post entitled MY FIRST AWARD..Ive tagged you... :3

Queenmatrai said...

Very very nice :)

You made me smile today.

prajyot said...

hey nice blog..!!

nil said...

Hey there,glad you came on my page :) Hope to see you there more often,i totally do!
There,I'm a stalker of your blog now ;) Update!! :)

Rohit Dassani said...

Awesome!! :)

nil said...

@ Desigheeandcoffee: Damn missed your comment.. Hi! :)

Sorcerer said...

hmmm... thats another nice one!!

Sorcerer said...

hmmm... thats another nice one!!

Jack said...


Just beautiful. Loved it. What next? And is the number real? LOL.

Take care

Mrs. Adventure said...

Loved it.. I can't figure out who the characters are yet... is it you or a friend???

► Dip said...

oh fuuuuuuuuuuck

sula, this is turning out to be one of my fav stories :D

name changed? anushua is nice

and KABIR is such a GOOD NAME, i so love the sound of it, might just name my kid KABIR..damn cute. i love it

grey t and black tracks --> Hotness.

what's anushua wearing??

next one better be for 18+ :p

oRange* said...

why didnt i see your blog earlier?!

i love your space!

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

hi :3

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

well, I was really sad about what happened to her..Ive read her blogpost yesterday and so i decided I will make a poem for her and what she feels >.<

Raj said...


ps: part 4 will take an eterenity coming. if u wanna read something else try my other blog.

Raj said...

when you comment like that how am i supposed to say no? sigh.
i can try to come up with something, though i rather it come up by itself.

Raj said...

khaak ke high standards...i am just avoiding narcissistic buggers. had my share last month. dont mind huh?

Raj said...

you absolutely want to believe i am an over confident bastard dont u? :D

of course u will, that makes you smart. :P

yes you can get a fatak se reply this way too. :)
but if u prefer i dont keep them moderated, let me know. its fine. i can remove it.

Queenmatrai said...

Why no new post???

We're waiting...

Pesto Sauce said...

What next? Wish such stuff happens with me too

And i would have disclosed my name but for some scandalous August posts in my blog

oRange* said...

you've been tagged!

mohit said...

i'm actually kinda freaked out .... is kabir a psycho killer ? (twist to the story :P)

Raj said...

hey. :)
happy new year to you too. enjoy the party.

Chocolate Lover said...

you are tagged! :)

Sunakshi said...

You've been awarded :)

Thousif Raza said...

oji its just getting better and bettr. read it loved it :)

wish you an awesome new year ahead, may god's blessings be always on you.....

take care and keep writing.............

Chocolate Lover said...

you have been awarded too :)

HaRy!! said...

i was seeing chak de then SRK was called Kabir and immediately reminded of yur story!!...keep em coming

Sorcerer said...

Happy New Year!!!

have a fantastic New year

DayDreamer said...

I loved this romantic saga to the core..keep them coming..

Hope this is not the end..

Desperately waiting for the Fourth Part..

Happy New Year!!


nil said...

Hey hon, happy new year!

Vinay Sharma said...

awsum :) .. continue ..

nil said...

babe,you've been tagged on my 2010 post...Go read! (:

Manjari Singh said...

Sulagna do see this. !!

Rohit Dassani said...

Hey You have been Tagged..... :)

Anonymous said...

very tastefully done.

Nahl said...

Interesting read, since the characters are so easy to click with! :)

Rohit Dassani said...

Well, you have been awarded the 'Best follower Award', check my blog. Congratulations!!

Dew drops said...

hey...i read the series u posted... its simply...awesome!!!
greaaat..captivating,magical and romantic...ful packed stuff...u seem like chetan bhagat yaar!! keep rocking!!!

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